Sunday, 5 July 2015

Here's what I've been doing

I've been looking at cat pictures and videos heres my favorite

yeah..... I'm actually doing writing, occasionally. I am trying to write more but I feel like my characterization is bad but I want you guys to tell me what you think. I will try to post more but the grammar could be bad. Anyway, more pallas cat's.



you're welcome

Sunday, 14 June 2015

Chapter 3 Off to the Woods

    The gates opened as the four companions left the walled town.

“So we go this way” Jade told them as she pointed toward the forest.
    “I can’t imagine why we have to be the ones who save the whole island from flooding! Why can’t it be the animals that live closer to the mountain?” Questioned Idalia.
    “Because a prophecy foretold it you id- Idalia,” Replied Jade haughtily
“Well I’m just saying. Like what if it was a hoax or something.”
“Well-”
“Stop fighting it’s getting on my nerves,” the deep voice of the fox/creature thing snapped.
“It’s obvious thats Jade is right
“Wha- but,” Idalia stuttered in response.
“Stop trying to weasel out of your responsibility,” he said.
“ And just who are you huh?”
“Mud, thats my name,”
“Um nice name?” replied Idalia.
Everyone walked on awkwardly. Idalia felt two pairs of eyes boring into her as she walked Is firus totally unaware of the hostility toward me? Really is he CLUELESS Firurs started to hum an upbeat happy tune in contrast to the weather as the thought entered I dalias head. Nope. He does not. Wow. Just wow...  They walked for an hour or so more. When Idalia heard Jade pipe up from the front.
“Guys?”
“What?” Replied Firus.
“Remember that creek we all used to play in as pups, Firus?” Jade asked.
“Duh, that tiny river was awesome, why  are you bringing it up now.”
    “Well,”Jade said, “It's not so tiny anymore,”
    Firus and Idalia ran toward the hill Jade was on Mud lagging behind them. Idalia looked down and gasped. Idalia saw a large rock fall in, it was pulled by so fast she blinked and it went a yard. This did not look good.

Authors note:
I was so tempted to call this Into the woods XD. Sorry this is short. But haha A01315 you can’t make fun of me for not posting now! Also yes the river is flooded because of all the rain. Darn it Thorin, wait did  I say that? Whoops.

Sunday, 10 May 2015

Chapter 2 Mission Briefing (no grammer check,you're welcome)

Thump thump thump. Idalia was woken by a loud knock on her door.
“Idalia the chieftain requests your presence," said a  females voice.
Why would the chieftain want to see me?  Idalia thought. Her head cleared and…
“EEEEK!! Uh-oh I need to go,” Idalia mumbled as  she bolted through the door.
“Hey if YOU don’t mind you can wait,” A silver fox yelled.
“Oh umm ya uh sorry,"
The silver fox trotted lazily toward Idalia. I hate meeting new animals now. Thought Idalia. Any animals she did meet were hostile and would reply in few words if she said anything. This had all started when… “Ey! Chieftain. Wants to. See. You. Now!,"  yowled the silver fox in her ear. Idalia stumbled and fell down. The silver fox tried to hide her sneer. Fine sheesh you didn’t have to yell dullard. No bad Idalia don’t think that word be nice. Maybe she could be your new friend. Idalia picked herself off the ground. “Fine. lets go," she replied with contempt.
    Idalia and the silver fox walked toward the big hut in the center of the village.  Is her name Raven ? Lets find out. “So um Rav-”
“My name is Jade,"  shot back the silver fox
“Oh um sorry I just mistook you for a friend o-”
“I am the only silver fox in the whole village and you have no friends besides Firus,"
Rude! That was harsh guess she is totally absolutely not friend material. After a minute of awkward silence they arrived at chieftain's grand den.  Actually, it’s not that grand - but it is a lot better than my den, though. When the rain first started, the wind was so strong that it tore down the whole village- and no one has time to make it as  extravagant as it was before-  animals are now focusing on getting more food because all the prey is hiding.
“Hey, Firus!” yelled Jade.  
"Hi Jade" replied Firus. Another fox was following Firus or what Idalia thought was a fox. The fox was as big as Firus and his pelt was dark brown. His tongue was lolling  out on the right side of his mouth but he had that fox flair. Idalia was reasonably confused about what species he was in. He looked around hungrily.  The big  fox’s eyes met hers and he bared his teeth for a second. Umm excuse you  thought Idalia  How is that… thing even a fox? Is it a fox? While everyone else was talking about the quote unquote epic adventure they were going on. Idalia begged to differ, why were they supposed to go on an adventure to stop it why not great warriors do it? Steadily the rain grew harder and faster maybe some sleet was there too. Idalia heard Jade say something along the lines of “Idalia is such a charming fox no wonder she has soo many friends!” Lies! Lies,LIES she's just saying that so Firus is still her friend ugh! Everyone pretends to like me around Firus so he still hangs out with them. Why do the dislike me so much? Idalia wondered as she Walked over to the door fuming on the inside and knocked on it, with her head.
“Who are you? Don’t you know its raining like there is no tomorrow out there,”  said a voice from behind the door.
“It’s Idalia….. and friends,” said Idalia with more bitterness than she meant .
“Oh?OH! Please do come in!”
The large oak door opened. The deputy a fox with most of her pelt orange, black paws and a white tipped tail was pulling it open with a brass door knocker. Idalia walked in with faux confidence & stood near the large fire pit in the center.  Idalia heard voices come from the still open oak door.  In came Firus,Jade, & that wolf fox creature thing.  The fox/wolf ,she wasn’t sure which it was, thing sat on her right, Jade on her left, & Firus in front of her. Idalia looked behind Firus. There she saw the doors to the catwalk the chieftain usually made announcements on. On her left beyond Jade was a door frame with a few vines hanging down the bones of small animals (bone marrow sucked out) were attached to making a clicking noise when an animal went through. Which was exactly what they did when the chieftain walked in.
    “ Hello chieftain,” uttered all the foxes & wolves.
    “You all may be wondering why I brought you here,” the chieftain said as he circled the group around the fire.
“You see a believe you are the animals in a prophecy spoken long ago in said prophecy the animals go a mountain top and stop the big lake , that surrounds us on every side, from flooding the island,” He finished with such finality that even hinting that he could be wrong could result in aggravation from the Chief.
So thats why we were called here? Some prophecy. And we are the animals to save the island? Really thats just. Wow.
    “So if you follow me I will show you a map of the island made by the tribe of eagles,”he told them as he walked into another room and closely followed the other animals.  The map was very old but very well crafted it showed all the land beautifully.  
    “This is the route you will go,” said the chief showing the long way around the island. The island was like a circle but there was a huge lake in the middle. On the right side ,that the village was closer to, was a desert that just where it ended was rain mountain. On the left side was densely packed forest that turned into a large meadow that had many villages in it along with a few tiny mountains.
    “ Why are we going the long way?” Inquired Idalia. “The desert side clearly is shorter and easier route, plus we can get water from the lake if we go to the shore the forest on the left side is on a cliff! No where near water.”
    “Idalia the reason is simple,” snarled Jade “The desert has the coyotes, if we went over there they would rip us to shreds.”
    “Okay, Okay, whatever” Idalia replied. She looked up and saw the chieftain glaring at her. Can’t catch a break anywhere huh?
    “Any way if you two are done squabbling,” the chief continued  here are your packs for the journey. The deputy scrambled to pass them each one bag. Each of the bags contained food and water.
    “That is all I have to tell you, you may go now,” the chief said as he stared out a window.
The four canine adventures left., and walked toward the town gate in the dead of night.
Authors note:

It’s been a while since I posted lol. Anyway Firus is A01315’s character. Have a nice day Great Shot, Your character will be in chapter 5 or 6. Other characters I will figure out later.

Saturday, 9 May 2015

Question my only two viewers

Hey so I have the next few chapters written. But they have not been Grammar checked soooooo would you guys want me to post it now? Or check it for grammar and probably not post it for a while?

Wednesday, 14 January 2015

Whoops

I haven't posted for a while, whoops. Don't worry I will post soon I have written the second chapter it just needs to be re-checked for grammer

Saturday, 29 March 2014

Chapter One The Journey Begins


Many animals were crowded in-front of a platform. It was drizzling or as most animals called it after many months of nonstop rain-a clear sky "It finally cleared up a little bit," commented a  fox with black fur,hazel eyes and a strange sun mark on her forehead
Firus a red wolf sitting next to her replied "You can say that again it was raining Elephants and hippos last night!"
"Firus it's cats and dogs not whatever you just said"
“Well it was raining harder that those two animals.”
“Ahem” coughed a deep raspy voice.Everyone  stopped talking and looked at the platform.


A big black wolf with a scar over his left eye came on to the platform. A small fox hurried after him.
“SILENCE” commanded the wolf. The crowd quickly looked up at him.
“It has not escaped my attention that it has been raining eleven months. So my  deputy and I have decided what we shall do. We shall send animals to the rain-den” The wolf said calmly
Murmurs swept through the crowd.  little snippets of what they said where
“Mountain”
“faraway”
“insane”
A voice shouted from the crowd “why do we need to go all the way to the rain den? It’s probably just the rainy season.”
“It’s been raining for nearly a year.No rainy season is that long.” The deputy replied bluntly.
“The leader of this village shall now pick the animals that are going to the rain den.”
The leader cleared his throat and said a single word “Idalia.”
Idalia’s breath was sucked out of her chest. She  stopped “W-wh-wha-what?” she whispered  words barely escaping her lips.
Why me”  she thought. She sat staring blankly in front of  her. The chief called out a few other names but she just sat there looking forward wondering why her. Firus said  to her after the chief finished “Hey  I am going too!”
“Yay.”  Idalia replied blankly
“Why aren’t you happy? That isn’t you.”
“Because I’m going to the rain den. DO you know how far that is!?”
“Um no heheh”
“my point exactly”
“Cheer up Idalia you're going on a ADVENTURE!”
“I don’t want to go on an adventure!”
“Well you're going any way Mrs.Pouty.”
“Ugh”
Then Idalia and Firus arrived at her den.
“Bye Firus”
Idalia padded into her humble abode. It was a small dark hut that had a bit of grass for a bed and a tiny heap of food mainly of nuts and berries,animals were scarce because of all the rain. Well she thought as she curled in her bed this is probably the last in a while (or forever) I will sleep here. She pondered why she was going a bit before her mind drifted into darkness.

Thursday, 26 December 2013

Prologue

A single fire lit the room  and shadows danced on the walls. The smaller shadow-maybe a fox female said “Its been raining for months now.”
“I know this. You do not have to tell me,” stated the bigger shadow,  a male wolf.
“What do we do chief?”
“What any sensible animal should do”
“You don’t mean…..”
“Yes, we will send some of our animals to the rain animal’s den.”
“Sir who would we send?”
“Her,” the wolf stated.
“What! She couldn’t hurt a fly,” yelped the fox.
“Do I not know that already? Of course, some warriors will go with her.”
“She Wouldn’t survive.”
“She better,” the wolf replied grimly as he blew out the fire.

All was dark.